Thursday, 7 November 2019
Mr pent's balls
WALT: To create a eye catching poster on a google drawing using persuasive language to warn the audience.this task was really fun and enjoyable.this task has everything to do with the book word worst teachers we go to choose between three teachers Mr and Mrs lovey dovey, miss spics, or Mr pent balls i choose Mr pent balls because I thought it was the most funny and interesting.
Tuesday, 17 September 2019
Friday, 30 August 2019
pick a path
For writing we had to write and pick a path in groups of three and this is what I came up with as a group we decided that we wanted to do horror. I really liked this task because it was something that we have never done before and it was really interesting to see what we could come up with.I hope that you like it.
chapter chat
This is my VOCABULARY for chapter chat and it was a must do.I like doing this task because I get to learn new words every time.Every week we do this because it is a must do and I didn't like it at first but I do now because i do it every week.
Friday, 23 August 2019
what is in my backpack
WALT: Research how to survive in a desert, forest or bush. What sort of things should you take in your back pack? i really liked this task and it was very interesting.
I learnt that you have to take a lot when you go camping and there is a lots of thing to keep you safe that you have to take.
Wednesday, 31 July 2019
current events
WALT: use the six thinking hat's to reflect on our leaning
this task was real fun and think it was real easy.
Friday, 26 July 2019
lizard
This week for chapter chat for one of the tasks we had to research one of thees animal lizard a scorpion or a rattlesnake. i did the lizard and this is what i did.
Friday, 21 June 2019
stop littering
WALT:we had to write a piece of persuasive writing and then someone had to
give me feed back.
give me feed back.
Did you know that animals are dying because of the world and because we
are littering. This really need to stop otherwise we aren't going to have any
sea life left.
are littering. This really need to stop otherwise we aren't going to have any
sea life left.
My first reason is because just imagine if you home got ruined because of
animals it is just not fair well that is what it is like for sea life.
animals it is just not fair well that is what it is like for sea life.
If everyone even picking up one bit of rubbish will make a difference.
Also in some places you can't even swim in the sea because you cant see the
bottom because it is covered in rubbish and pollution
bottom because it is covered in rubbish and pollution
According to the internet the rubbish and pollution takes 1000 years to break
up into little pits and then they seep down into the soil which eventually
reaching the water supply.
up into little pits and then they seep down into the soil which eventually
reaching the water supply.
Also rubbish that goes into the sea sometimes ends up on islands and
beaches so not only is it destroying the sea life it is destroying us and our
beaches so what is the point in littering it gives us nothing but sham and lazy
beaches so not only is it destroying the sea life it is destroying us and our
beaches so what is the point in littering it gives us nothing but sham and lazy
According to the internet again Over one million seabirds are killed by ocean
pollution each year.
pollution each year.
The rubbish is also destroying the coral which helps sea life coral.
So now you know when you litter you now where it goes maybe people will
stop doing it because animals are dying because of us and it is not fer this
needs to stop.
stop doing it because animals are dying because of us and it is not fer this
needs to stop.
Nia's feed back
Persuasive Writing Success Criteria
Introduction
- Opening question
- Opinion/Reason
3 Reasons
- Each paragraph is one idea supported with your reasons/facts
Conclusion
- This ties back/recaps back to the introduction
Highlight evidence of linking words.
Hi Neve i love how you started with a question and told lots of facts it he
reasons maybe next time work on your opinion and some more liking words.
reasons maybe next time work on your opinion and some more liking words.
My reply Wow i don't know how much i used because in my writing maybe
i should use something else nested
i should use something else nested
Wednesday, 19 June 2019
Thursday, 23 May 2019
how long
For this activity we had to get in groups, and then 1 member had to jump as far as they could,and we would try and guess how many cm they jumped.After that we would measure how far they jumped. Once we jumped 1.94!
I really enjoyed this activity.
Friday, 3 May 2019
Friday, 29 March 2019
My recount
This is my recount the highlight is the stuff that I add after I went through and edit it the cross word are the word's that I did not want.
WALT: write a recount.
Monday, 18 March 2019
goal setting
Writing our goal for this term and at the end of the term we will see if we have a achieved them.
Wednesday, 13 March 2019
Friday, 1 March 2019
poem
I am learning to write a variety of poems and make it rhyme.the rap was hard because i am not a rapper and i did not no the songs very well.
the best poem was the acrostic poem .
Thursday, 28 February 2019
Wednesday, 20 February 2019
Monday, 11 February 2019
what would you do ?
WALT: Make predictions and inference the purpose of this activity was to share our thoughts and ideas how we could help .
Friday, 8 February 2019
Subscribe to:
Posts (Atom)