PrEP

pick a path

For writing we had to write and pick a path in groups of three  and this is what I came up with as a group we decided that we wanted to do horror. I really liked this task because it was something that we have never done before and it was really interesting to see what we could come up with.I hope that you like it.

chapter chat

This is my VOCABULARY for chapter chat and it was a must do.I like doing this task because I get to learn new words every time.Every week we do this because it is a must do and I didn't like it at first but I do now because i do it every week.

what is in my backpack

WALT: ​ ​Research how to survive in a desert, forest or bush. What sort of things should you take in your back pack? i really liked this task and it was very interesting.

I learnt that you have to take a lot when you go camping and there is a lots of thing to keep you safe that you have to take.

current events

WALT: use the six thinking hat's to reflect on our leaning
this task was real fun and think it was real easy.

lizard

This week for chapter chat for one of the tasks we had to research one of thees animal  lizard a scorpion or a  rattlesnake. i did the lizard and this is what i did.

stop littering

WALT:we had to write a piece of persuasive writing and then someone had to
give me feed back.

Did you know that animals  are dying because of the world and because we
are littering. This really need to stop otherwise  we aren't going to have any
sea life left.

My first reason is because just imagine if you home got ruined because of
animals it is just not fair  well that is what it is like for sea life.

If everyone even picking up one bit of rubbish will make a difference.

Also in some places you can't even swim in the sea because you cant see the
bottom because it is covered in rubbish and pollution

According to the internet the rubbish and pollution takes 1000 years to break
up into little pits and then they seep down into the soil which eventually
reaching  the water supply.

Also rubbish that goes into the sea sometimes ends up on islands and
beaches  so not only is it destroying the sea life it is destroying us and our
beaches so what is the point in littering it gives us nothing but sham and lazy

According to the internet again  Over one million seabirds are killed by ocean
pollution each year.

The rubbish is also destroying the coral which  helps sea life coral.

So now you know when you litter you now where it goes maybe  people will
stop doing it because animals are dying because of us and it is not fer this
needs to stop.

Nia's feed back

Persuasive Writing Success Criteria

Introduction

• Opening question
• Opinion/Reason

3 Reasons

• Each paragraph is one idea supported with your reasons/facts

Conclusion

• This ties back/recaps back to the introduction

Highlight evidence of linking words.

Hi Neve i love how you started with a  question and told lots of facts it he
reasons maybe next time work on your opinion and some more liking words.

My reply Wow i don't know how much i used because in my writing maybe
i should use something else nested