Friday 5 June 2020

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This was my first time doing a Haiku this was really fun and i would love to do it again.
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  1. Unknown5 June 2020 at 12:52

    Hello Neve it is Victoria here. This is an amazing post. What is your fav part of touch? Bye for now.

    Victoria

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    1. Unknown21 August 2020 at 12:32

      Hello thanks so much for your comment it was really helpful
      my favourite part is going on torment
      from Neve

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  2. Whaea Sue7 June 2020 at 16:13

    Kia ora Neve, I am pleased you enjoyed writing a Haiku poem. It is such a great way to share ideas and a skill making sure the syllables rule is followed. It is good to read your self-reflection about your new learning.

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    1. Unknown21 August 2020 at 12:30

      Hello thanks so much for your comment it was really helpful
      from Neve

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  3. Unknown9 June 2020 at 09:57

    Hello Neve. It is Aoife here, this is a great haiku. Next time maybe check your spelling but other wise this is a great poem. Keep up the great work. Bye.

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    1. Unknown21 August 2020 at 12:31

      Hello thanks so much for your comment it was really helpful yea next time i will make sure to do that.
      from Neve

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