Ola, Neve It's Millah and Pyper here. We read you prediction poem and this is a cool poem. I read your prediction, this is a good prediction, I like how you have put your own prediction in different boxes. Next time you could use a different font. But other wise it was a good predictions and poem. Do you have a favourite part in the book yet? Kind Regards, Millah and Pyper
Kia Ora Neve, I like how you have put your own prediction, Maybe next time you could add more descriptive language like adjectives. otherwise it was a very good poem/predictions. Last term our class worked on descriptive writing. Kind regards Aniya.
Kia Ora Neve, Its Cleo here from Totara 3. This is an Awesomely detailed poem about the book The One and Only Ivan. I really enjoyed reading you predictions and I liked how you had Pyper's and Millah's predictions as well. I have read the book and I enjoyed it but it was a bit sad heading towards the end. Maybe next time you could add more colours to the Google drawing instead of black and green. What was your favourite part about the book?
Kia Ora Neve, This is an Amazing google drawing that you have done it has a lot of detail in it, What was your favorite bit on the book & what was your favorite chapter? Bye Jazmine
Ola, Neve
ReplyDeleteIt's Millah and Pyper here.
We read you prediction poem and this is a cool poem. I read your prediction, this is a good prediction, I like how you have put your own prediction in different boxes.
Next time you could use a different font. But other wise it was a good predictions and poem.
Do you have a favourite part in the book yet?
Kind Regards,
Millah and Pyper
Kia Ora Neve, I like how you have put your own prediction, Maybe next time you could add more descriptive language like adjectives. otherwise it was a very good poem/predictions. Last term our class worked on descriptive writing. Kind regards Aniya.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Neve, Its Cleo here from Totara 3.
ReplyDeleteThis is an Awesomely detailed poem about the book The One and Only Ivan. I really enjoyed reading you predictions and I liked how you had Pyper's and Millah's predictions as well. I have read the book and I enjoyed it but it was a bit sad heading towards the end. Maybe next time you could add more colours to the Google drawing instead of black and green. What was your favourite part about the book?
Good Job!!
Kia Ora Neve,
ReplyDeleteThis is an Amazing google drawing that you have done it has a lot of detail in it, What was your favorite bit on the book & what was your favorite chapter?
Bye Jazmine